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15.8.11
First Sentence of a Failed Novel
Do you have failed first sentences of novels you tried to write? Here's one:
Her skin was chalky white, but Patrick thought she was rosy. Amelia was stretched out on the bed, beneath the mosquito netting. Please share your own failed sentence in the comments section:
"My name is not really dewey Kincaid but that doesn't matter right now. What does matter is that I'm driving down the cloudy caves of the devil's architecture and imagining rhinos every few seconds standing in the middle the road ready to decimate the many of us upon impact."
"My name is not really dewey Kincaid but that doesn't matter right now. What
ReplyDeletedoes matter is that I'm driving down the cloudy caves of the devil's architecture and
imagining rhinos every few seconds standing in the middle the road ready to decimate the
many of us upon impact."